Nowadays there is plenty of global and political problems in our modern world. People are concerned by the situation in Syria that lasts a big period of time. It is the Syrian civil war that began in 2011 and continues until today. Millions of victims, destroyed cities and suffered nature, it is just a little list  of this terrible event.
 Due to this war people start running away from the country and save their lives. They usually go to European countries, but there local citizens force them to move out. So, they have to leave the safe places and return to Syria.
 There are many opinions about it. Should they leave the safe places and return to their hometowns? Some people confirm that besides Syrians, many other nations use this opportunity to move to a civilian country and so, do it. Subsequently, European countries become too populated, and beyond this, some cultural values break. People in Europe are accustomed to a calm life, but Syrians and other Near Eastern nations intrude and change the habitat negatively.
 However, some Syrians return to their homeland not because of Europeans’ influence, but because of their own desire. From their point of view, they are citizens of this country and they must fulfill the civil obligation, to be the citizen during the whole life and do the best for their country. So, they live here, provide their children with education and find a job. They just live an ordinary life despite the war.
 As for me, I suppose it is unfair to expel refugees from the safe habitat, I mean European countries. It is better for them to continue an ordinary life somewhere far away from the homeland. Probably, it is the only way to avoid catastrophic events among the peace habitants.
 Finally, we should do everything to avoid such terrible events. The war is a consequence of a wrong and non-productive policy and not compromise relations with peace habitants. 

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